I absolutely love writing ekphrastic poetry. It is challenging, but so much fun to try to capture the emotions or perspective of an image through poetry. Rattle is one of my favorite poetry places to visit each month as they offer a monthly challenge. The amount of submissions they receive each month is off the charts. Tim, the editor, shares these details with each nice rejection letter. If you’ve never checked out Rattle, I highly encourage you to do so as they post fantastic poetry, podcasts, and accept poetry submissions beyond ekphrastic poetry.

My very first attempt for Rattle was for their June 2022 challenge: https://www.rattle.com/june-24-2022-by-sarah-russell/

Here’s my response:

Summer Surrender

beneath the lavender mountains 

I flung myself

head over heels

into the cool blue’s embrace

surfacing breathless to buoyant laughter

rippling across the lake

savoring forever

the first sweet surrender

summer love

free and sun-kissed

(Bloggers of wordpress, please advise about how to make the poetry look correct on a post. Do you have to create an image? I did not know how to get rid of the extra spaces.)

Please share any great sources or advice you’d like to share about writing ekphrastic poetry. I’m all ears!

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18 responses to “The beauty of ekphrastic”

  1. Book Dragon Avatar
    Book Dragon

    I have never written an Ekphastic poem. It is now on my to do list!
    I enjoyed the sensual nature of your poem – I could envision myself on that pier.
    Re blogging – I am still figuring it out.

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  2. Ramona Avatar

    I love your poem. There’s such a lovely sense of summer’s freedom in the words. I wonder if you’re familiar with Irene Latham. She often writes ekphrastic poems. She blogs at Live Your Poem, https://irenelatham.blogspot.com/

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    1. Barb Edler Avatar

      Awesome info, Ramona! Thank you!

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  3. Glenda Funk Avatar

    Barb,
    I did not know about Rattle. Thanks for that information. Nor am I sure how to create single spacing in Word Press. I hope someone has an answer to that query. I, too, love ekphrastic poetry, and you’ve written a lovely one, I can’t wait until summer arrives so I can fling myself into it.

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  4. kimhaynesjohnson Avatar

    Barb, this is a delightful slice. I want to fling myself into summer and all of its lavishness, which, right now, is mainly warmth. We need a writers’ weekend somewhere mid-U.S. so we could steal away for a long weekend somewhere maybe in Telluride or Colorado Springs. Even Denver, but I probably wouldn’t be able to breathe there. So to answer your question about making poetry format correctly, you will see that when you go to insert a photo or video, there is also the option to insert verse. Insert a verse block and that should do the trick. It took me awhile to figure that out. I love how you are learning and continuing to stay with blogging. You are doing a great job. I will definitely be checking out Rattle, too. Thanks for sharing and teaching us new things. We all learn from each other.

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    1. Barb Edler Avatar

      Kim, thank you so much for the tip! A writing retreat sounds fabulous!

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    2. Barb Edler Avatar

      Thanks for the tip, Kim! A writer’s retreat sounds amazing!

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  5. amyilene Avatar
    amyilene

    I LOVE Rattle!! You are so brave to submit….I have only written quietly in response to the challenge. I did bring it to my students and some of them ate it up! I even had a few artists ask about doing it the other way, creating visual art from poetry. Yours is stunning. (and I have no tips for formatting poetry, although I think I have cut and pasted from a doc in the past and that has helped)

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  6. mbhmaine Avatar

    Ekphrastic poems are such fun! Those first four lines of yours are especially lovely. I really enjoy how the colors of the photo infused your verse and set the mood. I’ve played around with some of the Rattle prompts, but haven’t ever entered. You’ve given me a nudge to try again. Happy writing!

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  7. Erika Avatar

    Rattle is new to me, thanks for sharing. Thanks also for sharing your lovely ekphrastic poem. I love them too! Glad you asked about the formatting, now thanks to you and Kim I know (never figured that out before!).

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  8. Maureen Young Ingram Avatar

    Ekphrastic poetry is a very challenging style, I think! I love what you have shared here – the gorgeous details of “surfacing breathless to buoyant laughter/rippling across the lake”…I feel as if I am in the water, too. Thank you for sharing about Rattle – I am not familiar with this at all.

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    1. Barb Edler Avatar

      Thank you, Maureen!

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    2. Barb Edler Avatar

      I think you’d really like the Rattle website, Maureen.

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  9. rdicarne Avatar

    Beautiful poem! I will need to try out this form. Thanks for sharing the link to Rattle.

    As far as posting a poem goes…I usually type it into a Google or Word doc. Then o copy and paste as plain text. It usually works. I did it today in fact.

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  10. onathought Avatar

    Beautiful details here. Thanks for sharing about rattle too! I usually hit shift while I hit return – that gets rid of the extra space. 🙂

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    1. Barb Edler Avatar

      Thanks for the tip!

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      1. Denise Krebs Avatar
        Denise Krebs

        You can also remove the extra spaces by going into TEXT mode (as opposed to the default VISUAL, up in the upper right hand corner) and deleting the extra spaces.

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  11. Denise Krebs Avatar
    Denise Krebs

    Oh, Barb, that was gorgeous. It goes so nicely with the photograph. I saw more in the image with your words. Like “beneath the lavender mountains” – Oh, I hadn’t even noticed the mountains when I first looked at the photo before reading your poem. That is what a good ekphrastic poem does, in my opinion. I also loved the lines: “the first sweet surrender” and “free and sun-kissed”

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