Slice of Life Post for March 14, 2023

Naturally, I love playing with words. I think anyone who writes probably does. My question is how do we get our students to realize the benefit of playing with words? I love to write crazy sentences like “He loved her for her yellow car.” Then showing students how different this sentence would be if I wrote, “He loved her for her yellow teeth.” Even better, “He loved her for yellow teeth and million dollar bank account” Okay, that kind of attraction makes sense. I can also show them how just saying something like “He loved her” has a power in its simplicity.

I also enjoy inviting students to create what I call “paste pot poems.” Literally, they are a type of found poem, but I would ask students to look at magazines and newspapers and cut out words that appealed to them. After they had compiled a huge amount of words, I would have them begin arranging them to create a poem. Eventually these poems end up looking like ransoms note. Now, I’m sure I stole this idea from some book at some time back in the early days of my teaching so I’m unable to correctly give credit where credit is due. Just saying, this is not an original idea, but you know I think kids always did enjoy that assignment, and I wish I would have thought to use it as a pre-reading assignment for literature. For example, I wish I had given them tons of poems from the Romantics or primary documents from the Depression Era to see what kinds of found poems they would have created.

One of my very first paste pot poems so it’s darn old. I’m positive I created this while teaching at Oxford Junction.

I also like to have my students use a chart in which they identify the types of words and the number of words they used in a sentence. It’s called SOS, or Save Our Sentences. I think this is a fascinating assignment because it shows a writer any patterns they might be repeating. A writer will see if they’re beginning a sentence the same way or not varying their sentences enough. I should probably use that technique for blogging, but hey, I’m just trying to having fun when I blog, and that’s my whole point about wrangling words.

Anyhoo, what kind of things do you like to do in the classroom to get students to play with words?

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14 responses to “Wrangling Words”

  1. Glenda Funk Avatar

    Barb,
    I love the alliteration in “paste pot poetry.” It gives freshness to found poetry. s I said a couple days ago, I like sentence level work. When teaching Gatsby I often used what I call a one-sentence character analysis to teach periodic sentences. I’d show students how to build the sentence by stacking adjective phrases in a vertical line and then adding the predicate. It was fun.

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    1. Barb Edler Avatar

      What a great technique to build on sentence skills! I’ll have to steal this idea for my composition class.

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  2. Maureen Young Ingram Avatar

    I am learning so much about writing from you, Barb! (And Glenda, too, for sure!) I am going to make a paste pot poem for myself today, just for the fun of it. I love the idea of ‘save our sentences’ – again, thinking purely about my own writing, I need to do this. Thanks!

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    1. Barb Edler Avatar

      I’ll try to find you the graphic and send it to you.

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  3. Rita K. Avatar
    Rita K.

    You shared some great idea here, Barb. Makes me want a classroom to try them out. Alas, those days are gone. One thing I used to like to do was give kids a list of all the letters int alphabet with a blank space beside each. After we finished reading a short story or nonfictional text, they would have a few minutes to list as many words as they could that related to the text. It was fun and pushed kids to return to text, think more deeply and reread.

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    1. Barb Edler Avatar

      I love that idea, Rita! Thanks!

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  4. Jennifer Floyd, Ed.D. Avatar

    I want to try create some paste pot poems for myself! Your classroom sounds like a wonderful place to work on the craft of writing! I want to pull up a chair, a notebook and a pen and start writing!

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  5. kimhaynesjohnson Avatar

    Barb, I can’t wait to try Paste Pot Poems! And SOS. You are so full of rich ideas for wordplay – but you can also build in content to the creativity. There is something about words, magazines, glue, and scissors that is wholly appealing to me, and I see how reluctant writers can feel a measure of success even before they begin. Thank you for sharing these ideas!

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    1. Barb Edler Avatar

      I think the kinetic aspect is great for kids.

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  6. Denise Krebs Avatar
    Denise Krebs

    Barb, thanks for sharing these ideas. It’s not easy finding magazines around my place to cut out appealing words for paste pot poems. In Bahrain, I kept a little box of words that would inspire me to write in my journal. (I wonder what happened to that box; I wouldn’t have thrown it away.)

    Right now I feel like I can’t remember anything I used to teach!

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    1. Barb Edler Avatar

      I think that’s because you’re enjoying retirement.

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  7. cmargocs Avatar
    cmargocs

    You inject so much fun energy into your description of word wrangling with your students! It reminds me of the book “Max’s Words” by Kate Banks, one of my favorites celebrating the joy of building a vocabulary.

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    1. Barb Edler Avatar

      Oh, I will have to check that out!

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