Slice of Life Post, April 18, 2023, by Barb Edler

Recently I attended a poetry event that had several workshops directed by poet laureates. (You could choose two to attend). The poet laureates also shared their poetry on Friday night. During this time, I was impressed by all the poets’ work. Of course, everyone in attendance was a writer/poet/fan of poetry. One comment that really resonated for me was when a poet said that we as poets and readers of poetry should do more to promote the work of poets by writing reviews, etc. I think this is a marvelous and easy thing to do. So, today, I want to mention two poets I thought were powerful and interesting.

The first workshop I attended was with Matt Mason, a Nebraska State Poet who has run workshops in Nepal, Botswana, Belarus, and Romania. I loved his poetry. For his poetry collection At the Corner of Fantasy and Main, he spent numerous hours at Disneyland, trying to capture why he was so fascinated by the place. My favorite poem so far of his is “A Thing that Happened” in his book I Have a Poem the Size of the Moon. Rather than spoil what this poem is about, you can hear him read it here: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FKNumSUFiGk.

The second workshop I attended was with Caryn Mirriam-Goldberg. She is a two-time cancer survivor who uses poetry to find healing paths. Several attended her workshop, and everyone who shared, read poetry that was tender, haunting, and moving. She calls herself a “Poet, Writer, Facilitator & Transformative Language Artist.” She had several wonderful prompts for us that morning including the following: “Starting with ‘I did not expect to survive, write about what you survived, and how.” Caryn has also created the Transformative Language Arts Network which you might like to explore.

During the next month, I’m going to push myself to write a more polished poetry review of their work. In the meantime, I have to read some persuasive papers. I wished I would have known our school was going to close down, I would have changed my last unit to reading poetry and persuasively writing a poetry review. Hey, no one would have been able to fire me, right?

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10 responses to “Poets Matt Mason and Caryn Mirriam-Goldberg”

  1. Glenda Funk Avatar

    Barb,
    Thank you for sharing Matt’s poem. It’s powerful and heartbreaking and poignant, especially since he recorded it before Uvalde. I’m going to explore the TLN later. I wish I’d read this post before writing and sharing my silly triolet. I have another idea for a poem now. I do write reviews of poetry books on Goodreads, and I know Susan Barber has her students read poetry collections and blog about them. If our NCTE session is accepted, you might want to share your review writing ideas there.

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    1. Barb Edler Avatar

      Yeah, that would have been great to do. I’m so sorry it didn’t get accepted. Write your poem! Hugs, Barb

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  2. Denise Krebs Avatar
    Denise Krebs

    Barb,
    Good advice: “poets and readers of poetry should do more to promote the work of poets by writing reviews” I’m glad you are going to pursue getting even better with this. I would like to invite you again to consider posting your reviews for the Poetry Friday audience.

    I can see why “A Thing Happened” is your favorite of his poems. Oh, my goodness. How powerful is that?

    I’m sorry about your school closing. That is heartbreaking for all the faculty, staff and especially the students.

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    1. Barb Edler Avatar

      Yes, the students are really struggling. I keep forgetting about the Poetry Friday. Try to give me a heads up on Thursday if you think about it. Thanks for the gentle reminder now.

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  3. Rita K. Avatar
    Rita K.

    Barb, You sound like you are handling the school closing well and hopefully, it’s providing a bit more time for you to delve into the poetry you love. I’m glad to hear about both of these poets and will definitely check them out. Never heard of a Transformative Language Artist, but that certainly piqued my interest. Can’t wait to explore that site. Thanks for sharing all of this, Barb. Take care!

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    1. Barb Edler Avatar

      Thank you, Rita. I’m handling the school closing as well as I can. It’s so much harder on other teachers. They just hired a soccer coach who sold her house, moved there, and then found out a week later that they were closing. LIKE WHAT!!! How awful! Plus, I have two close colleagues who are really struggling. I pray they can find jobs they want.

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  4. Maureen Young Ingram Avatar

    Matt Mason’s poem has me in tears. I am going to share it with teacher friends. Just a stunner. Image of his child not being able to fit in the hiding place, being alone. So much that is so heartbreaking. This is the power of poetry! Barb, what an incredible blog focus this would be, to spotlight these incredible folks. I would devour every word you write! (Well, that’s easy – I already do, hahaha.) Thanks for this slice !

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    1. Barb Edler Avatar

      Oh, Maureen, you practically have me in tears. Thank you so much for your kind words and enthusiasm. I’m glad you enjoyed his poem and please do share it!

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  5. kimhaynesjohnson Avatar

    Oh, wow. Matt just lit a fire in my soul for the heartbeats of panic in these words he shares. You can see his protection of his girls, not just feel it. You can taste it, smell it, drink it. He is a protective father. But he knows he’s up against beasts that strike without warning.

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    1. Barb Edler Avatar

      Amen! You’ve captured his purpose perfectly!

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