Slice of Life Post for March 28, 2024

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“It’s a far, far better thing I do than I have ever done. It’s a far, far better rest I go to than I have ever known.”

Sydney Carton from Charles Dickens A Tale of Two Cities

If I could, I would change our current two-party system because I do not believe it is working. Of course, I understand there are lots of parties that can run for any position, but between the House and Senate, there definitely seems an unwillingness to cross party lines or to collaborate. I worry that our country is failing, and it makes me very sad. Quite possibly, by simply sharing this comment, I am opening a door which will make me a target for all kinds of unkind remarks so just breathe and hear me out.

Instead of having a president, we should hire a CEO based on a democratic vote. Maybe they could even get paid as much as a college coach or a professional athlete. Imagine how enticing that paycheck would be. Then we would have other individuals run for positions based on the big problems that need to be solved: poverty, addiction, foreign affairs, environment, education, agriculture, crime, transportation, etc. Each year a report would be distributed to the entire country showing what specifically was accomplished by each department outlining the progress made. Perhaps a rubric could be developed where each individual was rated by the public. If those in charge were unable to make progress, they would then be put on probation, etc. just like any other kind of business. Incentives could even be offered for making successful contributions to society and for demonstrating significant progress.

It’s a thought and it probably needs a lot of work to hone into a working structure, but I think we need to hire and vote for reliable, hard-working individuals to improve the current state of affairs. I’m very afraid of where our country is heading. The poor are becoming poorer, the rich are becoming richer, and the working class is being squeezed even tighter. More importantly, people are not putting down their guns. I’d hate to see another day like July 14, 1789, occur in our country, but I can hear the drums pounding, and I can see Madame DeFarge busily knitting.

“I have sometimes sat alone here of an evening, listening, until I have made the echoes out to be the echoes of all the footsteps that are coming by and by into our lives.”

Sydney Carton from Charles Dickens, A Tale of Two Cities

The sun is shining here. I believe light begets light and darkness begets darkness, that some tales share a great message and perhaps a terrible reminder about history repeating itself and human nature’s terrible need to destroy itself and more. My poem today is inspired from Charles Dickens, A Tale of Two Cities.

When the Time Comes

a dream that ends in nothing
is still inspired
by one or a multitude

for every mysterious creature
carries its own secret heart
beating in a thousand breasts

its rule is vengeance
retribution begetting nothing
but oppression

hear them coming
fast, fierce, furious
hurry, it may be too late

but you, Lucifer's wife, will not
get the better of me for
I am an English woman

still, let me die knowing
my sacrifice is far better than
anything I've done before

Barb Edler
28 March 2024


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12 responses to “A Tale of Two Parties”

  1. Maureen Young Ingram Avatar

    I, too, feel this – “I’m very afraid of where our country is heading.” Your fear for our democracy is palpable. It has been a long time since I read A Tale of Two Cities; I do think we are living Dickens’ division of extremes – the best of times/ the worst of times. We aren’t ‘in this’ together, only arguing and negating one another. This line of your poetry stands out for me as a synopsis of how our country is working most days – “retribution begetting nothing.” I need to believe that our local communities are working better than the national level…aaack, now you’ve got me worrying, Barb.

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  2. Glenda Funk Avatar

    Barb,

    You are so right about the widening gap between the rich and the poor and the way the middle class gets squeezed more and more. I know many long for the system to function differently, but I’d never support having a CEO of a country. I see that as authoritarian adjacent. It’s exactly the rallying cry Orangey used in 2016: “We need to run the cb country like a business,” and the reason college is so expensive now: The business model replaced the liberal arts model. I don’t want more capitalism and its unbridled growth mentality. I want the system you’re describing: one that solves problems such as poverty, etc. Our system of government is a two-party one, and it can work when everyone pays attention, votes, learns the difference between fact and disinformation. We have the problems we do in no small part because people are more interested in entertainment than in civic engagement. I spend a lot of time studying issues and have long been dismayed by the obsession w/ so many things that distract from paying attention to national and international affairs. I don’t k ow how to fix the problems we have now, and they probably won’t be fixed in my lifetime. I just don’t see solutions coming from CEO types.

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    1. Barb Edler Avatar

      I totally understand your perspective. I definitely do not want a authoritarian adjacent, I just want accountability. I do vote and I do my best, but the swamp is real and I’m real tired of it.

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      1. Glenda Funk Avatar

        I think that swamp is pretty one-sided. When you have a demigod directing one party who refuses to negotiate in good faith and who then reverse course when they come to an agreement, the system can’t work. I wish we had more democratic socialism and less capitalism.

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      2. Barb Edler Avatar

        Totally agree. I don’t know how anyone can rally around Trump.

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  3. kimhaynesjohnson Avatar

    Barb, I’m quite worried, too. It used to be that whether one side won or lost, the other side still had respect despite disagreement. With the rise in extremism, I don’t see this as the case anymore. I fear rioting and unrest, and it troubles me. Great analogy to the literature. 

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  4. Denise Krebs Avatar
    Denise Krebs

    Barb, so many interesting thoughts here. I like that you have spent time thinking of ideas to make the nation work better. I should read A Tale of Two Cities; I missed out on reading it, but you got me thinking of the French Revolution, so I’m over here singing, “Do you hear the people sing, singing a song of angry men? It is the music of the people who will not be slaves again!” Here’s to real fixes to those big problem areas you mention. We can hope and work toward a better world for the next generations.

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    1. Barb Edler Avatar

      Look for a movie of the novel. I love the storyline. The book is a bit difficult at times because there is so much foreshadowing and some dense passages. It’s truly an incredible story.

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        Denise Krebs

        I’ll do that. Thanks for the advice.

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  5. Fran Haley Avatar

    Dear Barb – you had me at the first line, for I agree: The two party system isn’t working. This whole post is magnificently written. As a nation, we need to be about solutions. We can’t keep plowing the same dead ground and expect good results (to use a metaphor from 1030s history). I also really love this: “The sun is shining here. I believe light begets light and darkness begets darkness…” it is true. Every single line of your poem is stunning – and haunting.

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