Spring in the Midwest is volatile. Tuesday night we watched several weather reports, watched the radar, and wondered if we’d need to get to the basement.

I quickly cleaned the kitchen after supper because I didn’t want to lose the electricity before I had the dishes washed and the counter scrubbed. I watched the lightning, took pictures of the ominous clouds and reflected on the destructive nature of our human failures and life itself. Sin and storms are a natural combination which inspired the following poem.

Storm brewing on Tuesday, March 9, 2026
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3 responses to “A Storm’s Brewing”

  1. Glenda Funk Avatar

    Barb,

    I have been thinking about the storm devastation this morning and wondering if you had any damage. Your poem captures both the personal and metaphoric dangers in this atonal storm. I hope that windshield is metaphoric and not the condition of your car’s windshield. Love the irony in “it seems futile to change directions now.” Certainly captures our country’s wrong road journey.

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    1. Barb Edler Avatar

      It’s a metaphor. The hail at the end is a play on words.

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  2. Denise Krebs Avatar

    Barb, wow, isn’t that truth — our human failures are destructive like a storm. Your poem is so on point. The images are so powerful, like the colors on the windshield. You are mastering the fiction narrative poem.

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